Deal me in!

August 24, 2009

With Act I’s step outline on the corkboard, it was time to play cards — to shuffle around and, ultimately, assign each card from each story thread to a step in the outline, which I’ve done here:clustering

As you can see, I have clustered the story thread cards below each step card, identifying which step in the act it belongs to. The main difference you’ll see from how I organized the corkboard earlier is that, during story deconstruction (see example here), when the primary goal was to identify story threads and plot out their primary beats, the cards were positioned horizontally, linking them visually to form the threads. Now that each story element is already matched to a thread (color-coded for easy identification), we can mix up the positioning on the board, aligning them to a step rather than to their story thread siblings. That’s what you see in the picture above.

How this visual clustering helps

Once I’ve rearranged all the individual elements of each story thread, assigning them to a “parent” step in the outline, several questions become easily answered that, viewed just in a document full of words, would be much harder to identify, such as:

  • How important is this step to the story? A massive cluster of story elements certainly applies that many critical parts of the story need to be revealed in this one brief passage, which may indicate not only great importance, but identify unique challenges in how this scene will need to be written with great economy.
  • Are the story threads adequately represented and well-paced in their revelation? If a great passage of space shows up on the board for a particular story thread, that may indicate a flaw in how the thread is revealed.
  • Do any of the steps need to be updated? When shuffling the story thread cards around on the board to figure out which step in the outline should adopt it, this step may need to be rewritten to reflect a newly-assigned story thread element.
  • Are there any orphaned story thread elements? If a card doesn’t belong in any cluster, that tells me that either there is a gap in the step outline or that the story beat represented by this orphaned card maybe isn’t as important to the story as I thought it would be.

I’ll show in my next entry how the visual clustering has help me with Liberty in the Fires this week.